Guys will you read this and tell me if it makes sense. Offer and opinions, criticizism, etc. I'd appreciate it. Thank you.

[Wulfgar]

Re: Guys will you read this and tell me if it makes sense. Offer and opinions, criti

no, not specifically.

I got tix to the 03/20 show man!!

no shit? Ive been following an auction for those online... Cox arena is kind of a shitty place for a show..but what the hell right? what section you in? on the floor?

 

[Lestat]

Re: Guys will you read this and tell me if it makes sense. Offer and opinions, criti

no shit? Ive been following an auction for those online... Cox arena is kind of a shitty place for a show..but what the hell right? what section you in? on the floor?

i got two tix coming from the fan club, not sure what section they are in yet, but they are from the bands reserve so they should be decent. Got a block of 4 in the bench seats and 2 others on the side in the seats.

 

[Lestat]

Who hasn't had a favorite band works better and helps lead better.

I think its important to get the reader agreeing and saying yes early on. Sets a good prescedent.

 

[mountain muscle]

I think its important to get the reader agreeing and saying yes early on. Sets a good prescedent.

Then Listen to RR.

You want people to identify with the subject. They don't have to agree.

Also, brevity. Learn it, love it, write it.

 

[Becoming]

Here is my version -

Chicks are like pizza - usually I like pepperoni, but every once in a while, some hawaiian piques my appetitie, or maybe a sausage and mushrooms and I have to have that... Of course when a supreme with all the toppings comes around you know you got to have that too...

but usually I like pepperoni.

 

[KillahBee]

Honestly? Pretty sophomoric.

But that's just one man's opinion.

 

[Becoming]

Honestly? Pretty sophomoric.

But that's just one man's opinion.

Dude rate mine.

 

[needtogetaas]

gay

 

[KillahBee]

Here is my version -

Chicks are like pizza - usually I like pepperoni, but every once in a while, some hawaiian piques my appetitie, or maybe a sausage and mushrooms and I have to have that... Of course when a supreme with all the toppings comes around you know you got to have that too...

but usually I like pepperoni.

B-

It would have been a B+ if you said "sausage" instead of "pepperoni".

Chicks are like infants - they are great when they can't talk, they are cute when they roll around in bed, we all hate it when they spit up, they don't have the mental ability to control their emotions, and they are dumb.

 

[samoth]

Sorry, Manowar have already covered that subject, but much more concisely. And they used more profanity. And they gave it as a five minute speech in front of 30,000 brothers and sisters of metal.