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Flames are okay overall, nice material with some imagery woven into the action implications. However you lose ground with your wrap up material.
For instance...the first part ...
" 2 Suggestions for you there Pumpkin: Penis Weights and a Flatulence Inhibitor. "
To the point the flamee knows what to do with these items.
"Oh yeah, here's one more: "
Never give off the vibe that you had to think further in your flame stream. It only leaves an opening for a retort.
Such as...
I see from your post that you had to take and extra day to come up with the remainder of this sorry turd that you eeked out of those three brain cells you have working overtime. Between smoking crack and sucking cock to get your daily fix it is amazing you even came up with the first part of this fecal matter from your bat shit collection.
"file down those buck teeth a little if you want to keep blowing me you fried chicken-eating panty-wearing bugfucker!"
Now this part just makes you gay as hell insinuating that you like being blown by another guy. You are either gay and enjoy having your anal cavity explored to the unheard of depths of your duodinum or your are a chick who has been told that teeth marks on the pee pee are a no no.
I know you only have so much room on the karma thing to write up your useless blatherings but at least try and come up with something comical and insightful.
Have a nice day and enjoy sucking on your own toes and staring at the televison snow waiting for the message from the aliens to come into your one functioning brain cell.
*Note true story.
In london in the late 1970's an autopsy was done of a man who died in a car crash. His brain consisted of the stem, the lower brain and a wall of brain matter that connects the two hemisphers. The remainder of his skull cavity was filled with fluid. No left or right hermisphere yet he was a fully functional member of society and no one every hand any notion that he had any malformation what so ever.
For instance...the first part ...
" 2 Suggestions for you there Pumpkin: Penis Weights and a Flatulence Inhibitor. "
To the point the flamee knows what to do with these items.
"Oh yeah, here's one more: "
Never give off the vibe that you had to think further in your flame stream. It only leaves an opening for a retort.
Such as...
I see from your post that you had to take and extra day to come up with the remainder of this sorry turd that you eeked out of those three brain cells you have working overtime. Between smoking crack and sucking cock to get your daily fix it is amazing you even came up with the first part of this fecal matter from your bat shit collection.
"file down those buck teeth a little if you want to keep blowing me you fried chicken-eating panty-wearing bugfucker!"
Now this part just makes you gay as hell insinuating that you like being blown by another guy. You are either gay and enjoy having your anal cavity explored to the unheard of depths of your duodinum or your are a chick who has been told that teeth marks on the pee pee are a no no.
I know you only have so much room on the karma thing to write up your useless blatherings but at least try and come up with something comical and insightful.
Have a nice day and enjoy sucking on your own toes and staring at the televison snow waiting for the message from the aliens to come into your one functioning brain cell.
*Note true story.
In london in the late 1970's an autopsy was done of a man who died in a car crash. His brain consisted of the stem, the lower brain and a wall of brain matter that connects the two hemisphers. The remainder of his skull cavity was filled with fluid. No left or right hermisphere yet he was a fully functional member of society and no one every hand any notion that he had any malformation what so ever.
