This got posted at my college

[ORGANON CANON]

I hear a cry of depseration
one lonely soul, love without
ignorance will diminish
once strong now battered down

Hopes of better places
dreams of caring times
wishing for a blissful fate
realizing life goes on

Once strong, now withered
once white, now black
confused, crushed, giving up
a face apears from the shadows

Sun rises, a gentle breeze
the scent of flowers full bloom
a child laughs, a child runs
hope has been brought back alive


I wrote this in like 5 mins. while I was high and the english departent thought it was great. It's funny how some of these philsophical types like this kind of junk.

 

[Bodhidogma]

damn good bro

 

[Milhouse]

Pretty good stuff

 

[Warik]

Hey, it doesn't rhyme!

 

[HighIntensity]

Tears
Your eye weeps the fruit of physical frustration,
like a pocket of sadness it runs haphazerdly down your cheek.
To define as water, to understand as pain.
Trapped in a solid state it is your worry.
Unknown to oneself it has a path,
from your check to my ear the sense is clear.
The reality of human emotion, pain is transferred.
A synthesis occurs as my eye responds
I wipe your worry, and taste my sadness.

I wrote this in 10 mins and it got put in a book...

Nice work though...ORGANON CANON

 

[PsychoSkitz]

Go to poetry.com. They put everything in a book.

You can write:

Fast and hard
bite and grab
rail and kiss
not sex
rape.

And they'll publish it in a book hoping that you'll pay the $80 for the frikking book.

Fools, all of them!