I Cry.

[INVICTUS]

Sometimes when I'm alone I cry
Because I'm on my own
The tears I cry are bitter warm
They flow with life but take no form
I cry because my heart is torn
I find it difficult to carry on
If I had an ear to confide in
I would cry among my treasured friend
But who do you know who stops that long
To help another carry on
The world moves fast and would rather pass by
Than to stop and see what makes one cry
So painful and sad
And sometimes....
I cry and no one cares about why.

 

[OMEGA]

Sometimes when I'm alone I cry
Because I'm on my own
The tears I cry are bitter warm
They flow with life but take no form
I cry because my heart is torn
I find it difficult to carry on
If I had an ear to confide in
I would cry among my treasured friend
But who do you know who stops that long
To help another carry on
The world moves fast and would rather pass by
Than to stop and see what makes one cry
So painful and sad
And sometimes....
I cry and no one cares about why.

did you wright that?

if you did there were 3 places where I could feel a distinct presence and that is good for such a short piece

 

[Si|vio]

dude, you made the first reply and yet you still copy and paste his hole post??? what did you think he was gonna think your reply was about? man I hate when people make me scroll down for nothing.

nice poem though, very nice, easy to identify with. goodstuff.

 

[Frackal]

Guess what Silvio!!







































































































































































































You just scrolled all the way down here for nothing.

 

[Tha One CrumCake]

Hey Beast, guess what




































































































































































That's right I copied you.





























































































































What.

 

[Si|vio]

I can't believe you go on about other people being annoying or immature or "not on the same level" as you Frack... this is what you do for fun... this is your life.

 

[The_Mexican]

Frackel

 

[havoc]

I just wanted to play. peace

 

[Pimp C2]

LOL

Nice poem bro

 

[Frackal]

... this is what you do for fun... this is your life.

Silvio, save your condemnations and your silly cinema-drama like prose for somebody else...this is one thing I do for entertainment, or for relaxation, or for learning.

I am sure there is plenty we all could be critical about in your life too, so worry about that first and while you're at it attempt to develop a sense of humor.