Evaluate this pickup line i just used

[Yarg!]

Well it was spurr of the moment... just now after the gym i saw a chick working at a store so i approached. rate how i did. BTW it was successful:

M=me
H=her

M-Hey you look pretty bored
H- Yeah lol
M-Cool u guys sell any guys stuff here or just women
H- no we have guys stuff, u wanna see?
M- Sure show me everythign u got
*as shes walking leading me*
M- How long have u been workng here?
H- about a yr. its pretty fun
M- You go to school or anything?
H- Yeah. X school- taking X program
M- Cool i have a few friends doing that
H- Oh yeah?
M- yeah i go to X school- im in the music program
H- awesome, i can see(i had a guitar on my back)
M- Whats ur name?
H- XXX
M- Ahh cool Im yarg!
H- nice to meet u.
M- hey listen XXX theres a party a few of my friends are throwing tmr..would u like to accompany me?
H- sure, can i bring a friend?
M- totally. Sure
H- i just dont wanna go alone lol
M- no worries. so can i grab ur number?
H- sure! *hands me number*
M- im gonna be honest with you, i didnt come here for the necklaces
H- lol aww really?
M_ yeah everytime im done at the gym, i go to the mcdonalds over here- which probably isnt the best thing to do! and i see you and im like "damn i gotta talk to her.. " but i was too shy
H- Awwwww, you come here alot?
M- ya my gyms across the st.
H- o i go to this other one (name of gym)
M- cool, come to my gym
H- is it more expensive?
M- nah.. 8 bucks a month? i m getting my personal trainer cert. i can show you around.
H- aww wicked! thats awesome.
M- so ill give you a call tmr?
H- sounds like a plan!
M- cya
H- cya!

 

[buffer1]

shes gonna bring her boyfriend with her,lol

 

[Megalomaniac]

shes gonna bring her boyfriend with her,lol

I hope he's into threesomes.

 

[eat big]

That's a pick-up line? I thought that was just flirting.

 

[FISHTALES]

shes vin diesle?

 

[boxerjake]

M : Hey , you have a kind chin

H : Really ?

M : Ya ... the kind i'd like to rest my bag on


Works everytime .... lol

 

[Yarg!]

M : Hey , you have a kind chin

H : Really ?

M : Ya ... the kind i'd like to rest my bag on


Works everytime .... lol

LOL

 

[Lestat]

shes gonna bring her boyfriend with her,lol

good call

 

[rocky_road]

I don't see a definete pick up line in there.....it seems like the whole thing was a picking-up conversation. But it sounds like you can talk to women with ease. You definetely made here night, at least the work part of it

 

[mustang_00]

if it went that smooth with what you said, she's diggin your confidence. That's a +! If for some reason she brings a dude that you think is her boyfriend. You can be like ooh you must be the gay friend she told me she was bringing muah haha. Then close your eyes and start spinning in a circle swinging fists!!! If more than him gets knocked out so be it. I usually think about hitting midgets when i do that, opening your eyes and seeing old people layed out is kinda strange though.

 

[Yarg!]

if it went that smooth with what you said, she's diggin your confidence. That's a +! If for some reason she brings a dude that you think is her boyfriend. You can be like ooh you must be the gay friend she told me she was bringing muah haha. Then close your eyes and start spinning in a circle swinging fists!!! If more than him gets knocked out so be it. I usually think about hitting midgets when i do that, opening your eyes and seeing old people layed out is kinda strange though.

LOL when she mentioned her friend she said "shes coming from.." as in its a chick.

 

[needtogetaas]

shes gonna bring her boyfriend with her,lol

exactly

 

[Yarg!]

lol.. always with the worst case scenarios.. you guys need to get laid or something.

 

[nycgirl]

It appears you were confident and honest. No cheesy lines. I think you did well.

 

[fbodyguy02]

Very smooth brotha.... now that ladies and gents is what I call Game.

 

[silverbackn]

I am clay, mold me

 

[Phaded]

nice job brohamsky

 

[jackangel]

she actually said 'awww'?


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[alien amp pharm]

she actually said 'awww'?


...

apparently she said "lol" also.

 

[PBR]

Well it was spurr of the moment... just now after the gym i saw a chick working at a store so i approached. rate how i did. BTW it was successful:

M=me
H=her

M-Hey you look pretty bored
H- Yeah lol
M-Cool u guys sell any guys stuff here or just women
H- no we have guys stuff, u wanna see?
M- Sure show me everythign u got
*as shes walking leading me*
M- How long have u been workng here?
H- about a yr. its pretty fun
M- You go to school or anything?
H- Yeah. X school- taking X program
M- Cool i have a few friends doing that
H- Oh yeah?
M- yeah i go to X school- im in the music program
H- awesome, i can see(i had a guitar on my back)
M- Whats ur name?
H- XXX
M- Ahh cool Im yarg!
H- nice to meet u.
M- hey listen XXX theres a party a few of my friends are throwing tmr..would u like to accompany me?
H- sure, can i bring a friend?
M- totally. Sure
H- i just dont wanna go alone lol
M- no worries. so can i grab ur number?
H- sure! *hands me number*
M- im gonna be honest with you, i didnt come here for the necklaces
H- lol aww really?
M_ yeah everytime im done at the gym, i go to the mcdonalds over here- which probably isnt the best thing to do! and i see you and im like "damn i gotta talk to her.. " but i was too shy
H- Awwwww, you come here alot?
M- ya my gyms across the st.
H- o i go to this other one (name of gym)
M- cool, come to my gym
H- is it more expensive?
M- nah.. 8 bucks a month? i m getting my personal trainer cert. i can show you around.
H- aww wicked! thats awesome.
M- so ill give you a call tmr?
H- sounds like a plan!
M- cya
H- cya!

good job bro...very smooth.