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Ive never written a blog so Idk how it is. But i gotta start now. give me ur opinions ef'ers
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- Thread starter the.gladiator1987
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theres only so many you can choose from, or is there a way to make one urself?
theres only so many you can choose from, or is there a way to make one urself?
Your grammar needs help, that design isn't so hot and you need to delete that first "Hello World" post that Wordpress automatically adds to every new blog.
& to answer your question, you can have any design you want if you head the wordpress.org route (also free), rather than the wordpress.com route. It's free, but then you'd probably need to find and pay for a place to host it.
& to answer your question, you can have any design you want if you head the wordpress.org route (also free), rather than the wordpress.com route. It's free, but then you'd probably need to find and pay for a place to host it.
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lartinos
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Grammar must be perfect on a blog. The way you write the whole thing would have to be re-worked. Someone needs to cut and paste it on here.
bakemeacookie
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you just lost all credibilty with this one line:
"I am a personal trainer even thought most of them suck. I wont even call myself a real personal trainer since I have never gotten a “real” certificate; "
WTF dude? That's like me starting a engineering blog even though I admit I never got a engineering degree or worked in the industry at length. Why would anyone listen to me? A real personal trainer (who you just said they suck, real pro there) would rip you a new one.
Oh and get an editor. Most people clearly never even bothered to read your blog (I did though just to analyze it).
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"I am a personal trainer even thought most of them suck. I wont even call myself a real personal trainer since I have never gotten a “real” certificate; "
WTF dude? That's like me starting a engineering blog even though I admit I never got a engineering degree or worked in the industry at length. Why would anyone listen to me? A real personal trainer (who you just said they suck, real pro there) would rip you a new one.
Oh and get an editor. Most people clearly never even bothered to read your blog (I did though just to analyze it).
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Here are some things I PERSONALLY dont like and would recommend to work on:
want to eat better so you can live longer than 40
Sounds a little too dramatic.
and how bad my cardio sucks. Well sex with the females keeps me OK
Bit immature.
My name is David, I am a personal trainer even thought most of them suck.
I wont even call myself a real personal trainer since I have never gotten a “real” certificate
Hating on future fellow colleges gives a bad impression and the "real" certificate part reall doesnt go well there, I'd remove it all together
wasn’t even a buck yet (95lbs). I was scrawny, but I knew I had potential because my face was already starting to blossom.
Using terms like "buck" isnt very professional and the whole face blossoming thing sounds pretty ridiculous, also your face has nothing to do with fitness.
I knew I had a chance because girls talked to me even though they weighed more than me.
If that was the case now, then id be too tired to finish in the bedroom with them because id be too tired from flipping them around!
WTF is up with that comment, what does it even mean that girls that weigh more than you noticed you, thats not even a positive thing, neither is making fun of fatties that are starting to get a hang of the whole fitness concept and may stumble upon your website, periods and commas are off in this paragraph.
Just recently, however, I realized fitness is more than just lifting heavy weights. It is about being healthy, strong, and in shape. It is about being flexible and loose. It is about YOU wanting to make your body better for a longer, healthier life.
This part is great however grammar wise it's really bad, your periods and commas are just really misplaced, also the periods and commas are really misplaced here.
I will have my own website up within a month. There will be articles, a forum, and a store but the products wont be there yet.
I would change the one month to "soon" don't give time frames just in case stuff happens in your personal life or something that prevent you from doing this, it would be really lame to find your blog 2 months later and know nothing has been done.
That’s how stupid supplements are.
If you plan on selling supplements later I would remove this, I know you will try to filter through all the supplements in the market and put a select amount but this comment kinda takes away from that.
-CPR certified
CPR certified is something you can actually get pretty quick hence putting it as a goal within a whole year sounds like you are aiming low for simple things, I'd remove this one.
Overall it's pretty good but you do have to watch for the periods and commas that are all over the place and can affect your credibility, personally I'm just really picky and analyze everything maybe too much, hence why I put so much to correct but as you may see most think it's great so you did good bro.
Good luck
want to eat better so you can live longer than 40
Sounds a little too dramatic.
and how bad my cardio sucks. Well sex with the females keeps me OK
Bit immature.
My name is David, I am a personal trainer even thought most of them suck.
I wont even call myself a real personal trainer since I have never gotten a “real” certificate
Hating on future fellow colleges gives a bad impression and the "real" certificate part reall doesnt go well there, I'd remove it all together
wasn’t even a buck yet (95lbs). I was scrawny, but I knew I had potential because my face was already starting to blossom.
Using terms like "buck" isnt very professional and the whole face blossoming thing sounds pretty ridiculous, also your face has nothing to do with fitness.
I knew I had a chance because girls talked to me even though they weighed more than me.
If that was the case now, then id be too tired to finish in the bedroom with them because id be too tired from flipping them around!
WTF is up with that comment, what does it even mean that girls that weigh more than you noticed you, thats not even a positive thing, neither is making fun of fatties that are starting to get a hang of the whole fitness concept and may stumble upon your website, periods and commas are off in this paragraph.
Just recently, however, I realized fitness is more than just lifting heavy weights. It is about being healthy, strong, and in shape. It is about being flexible and loose. It is about YOU wanting to make your body better for a longer, healthier life.
This part is great however grammar wise it's really bad, your periods and commas are just really misplaced, also the periods and commas are really misplaced here.
I will have my own website up within a month. There will be articles, a forum, and a store but the products wont be there yet.
I would change the one month to "soon" don't give time frames just in case stuff happens in your personal life or something that prevent you from doing this, it would be really lame to find your blog 2 months later and know nothing has been done.
That’s how stupid supplements are.
If you plan on selling supplements later I would remove this, I know you will try to filter through all the supplements in the market and put a select amount but this comment kinda takes away from that.
-CPR certified
CPR certified is something you can actually get pretty quick hence putting it as a goal within a whole year sounds like you are aiming low for simple things, I'd remove this one.
Overall it's pretty good but you do have to watch for the periods and commas that are all over the place and can affect your credibility, personally I'm just really picky and analyze everything maybe too much, hence why I put so much to correct but as you may see most think it's great so you did good bro.
Good luck
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lartinos
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If I had to describe it in 1 word I would say "Unprofessional."
Why would people want to read this Glad? Answer that question. A blog should be informative, funny, etc.. just like a magazine article.
Niche markets are the way to go with blogs as well. For example there are no real magazines and such for the House Music Industry so
when I write a well written article people are getting info that is just not available anywhere. Bakemeacookie just explained something important as well. People only want to hear from experts and people with experience. My recommendation: (he will never do this) Make the blog about your personal life and make accompanying videos as well. I already told you about this. Basically your blog is no different than your posts here. You can cut and paste them and sometimes do them only as videos if you want.
Why would people want to read this Glad? Answer that question. A blog should be informative, funny, etc.. just like a magazine article.
Niche markets are the way to go with blogs as well. For example there are no real magazines and such for the House Music Industry so
when I write a well written article people are getting info that is just not available anywhere. Bakemeacookie just explained something important as well. People only want to hear from experts and people with experience. My recommendation: (he will never do this) Make the blog about your personal life and make accompanying videos as well. I already told you about this. Basically your blog is no different than your posts here. You can cut and paste them and sometimes do them only as videos if you want.
You can also drop the angle of trying to help people and educate them and just talk about what you do and how YOU live their life and let them take the good and take the bad out of it....
glad, use modzilla firefox if you don't already have a mac. it will fix your typo's.
be more direct, and remember, saying less is more sometimes.
put a picture of yourself on the top of your blog.
try and do an entry per day. pictures and videos are huge pluses.
this is my blog, although I haven't been keeping up with it as much as i'd like to.
Tear's of Exstacy
also, check out my boy Sean Croxton's channel on youtube and his blog.
YouTube - UndergroundWellness's Channel
Underground Wellness - Holistic Health and Nutrition Information - Protandim Review
He's doing EXACTLY what you want to be doing.
except the bro has a masters and he's a certified trainer.
he's only in his early 30s too, and he sells some good products.
he's up with current events, and could steer you in the right direction towards books you should be familiar with, and what to do.
honestly, I know this is what you want to do bro.
If I were in your position, I would talk to Sean a.s.a.p. and get him to mentor me.
be more direct, and remember, saying less is more sometimes.
put a picture of yourself on the top of your blog.
try and do an entry per day. pictures and videos are huge pluses.
this is my blog, although I haven't been keeping up with it as much as i'd like to.
Tear's of Exstacy
also, check out my boy Sean Croxton's channel on youtube and his blog.
YouTube - UndergroundWellness's Channel
Underground Wellness - Holistic Health and Nutrition Information - Protandim Review
He's doing EXACTLY what you want to be doing.
except the bro has a masters and he's a certified trainer.
he's only in his early 30s too, and he sells some good products.
he's up with current events, and could steer you in the right direction towards books you should be familiar with, and what to do.
honestly, I know this is what you want to do bro.
If I were in your position, I would talk to Sean a.s.a.p. and get him to mentor me.
redshirt27se
New member
man that shit is straight up terrible. i'm not trying to hate, but you should delete the entire thing. after you've done that, sit down and rewrite it all.
you want to start out by telling people about yourself, as how it relates to the point of the blog. talking about sex isn't impressing anyone and it has no relevance to the blog's subject matter. instead of just closing with one sentence about what your goals for the year are, go more in depth about them. talk about where you are currently in your pursuit of them, and why are pursuing them.
you want to start out by telling people about yourself, as how it relates to the point of the blog. talking about sex isn't impressing anyone and it has no relevance to the blog's subject matter. instead of just closing with one sentence about what your goals for the year are, go more in depth about them. talk about where you are currently in your pursuit of them, and why are pursuing them.
redshirt27se
New member
did you purposely spell ecstasy wrong? and why is their an apostrophe in tears?
sounds like you are the one who should be using firefox for autocorrect.
christ, rob, it's the title.
Tears of Ecstacy doesn't look half as cool as Tear's of Exstacy.
redshirt27se
New member
just giving you shit borris
calveless wonder
New member
does it include the topic Steroids Make Sports "Funner"?
Funner is not a real word bro, I think you were looking for "gooder"
justinjones1963
New member
ROFL at the comments.
It needs some work,.
It needs some work,.
Glad change your post settings so you have to approve others' comments before they go live.
Where is the fun in that?
I had a ton of bad things I could have said - but I applaud the "effort"
calveless wonder
New member
Funner is not a real word bro, I think you were looking for "gooder"
apparently you missed glad's thread on the paper he was going to write for community college on why steroids should be legalized
or every other thread where he makes an ahole of himself
Lol, but he graduated at 21
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lartinos
Guest
Glad waiting is a great idea.
The chance of Glad listening to sound advice from people he respects= 0%
This is a very good idea, just lay low it's only a couple of months more, wait to see if the kid is yours and how it plays out since that might change many things....
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lartinos
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In case you have not seen the responses in the blog itself here is one.
"THA REALEST NYGGA says:
January 11, 2011 at 6:11 pm
U A MARK ASS TRICK PUNK, WEAK ASS HOE, SUCK ON MY JIMMY YA PUZZY FAGGIT
YA BLOG DOO DOO"
"THA REALEST NYGGA says:
January 11, 2011 at 6:11 pm
U A MARK ASS TRICK PUNK, WEAK ASS HOE, SUCK ON MY JIMMY YA PUZZY FAGGIT
YA BLOG DOO DOO"
