Can someone fix this sentence.

[ohashi]

Then stick with your sentence fragment. No subject = fragment.

 

[ohashi]

I am a proven multi-...

Wh-at a-re yo-u try-ing t-o sa-y, yo-ung ma-n?

 

[bullett]

Should begin with "He is"

 

[Dial_tone]

This is coming up as a fragment on my spell checker. Fuck English, I am a Math, Computer and Science whiz.

Make it better and I will hit you with some K!!



Excellent multi-tasker, planner and organizer, effective in a team and independently.

Excellent multi-tasker, planner and organizer, effective within a team as well as independently.

 

[ohashi]

Some of you don't seem to understand what a sentence fragment is; nor, for that matter, what the subject of a sentence does.

 

[BigMike12]

Your fired!

 

[redguru]

Why not bullet your summary, then? I never use a summary in a resume, because a resume should be a summary in and of itself.

 

[ohashi]

Anyway, as far as resumes go, having fragment sentences is accepted because the entire resume is about you.

 

[The_Ghost]

Excellent multi-tasker, planner and organizer, effective within a team as well as independently.

Beauty buddy, thanks a million.

Bill Gates likes and so do I!!!

K to all that chimed in!!!

 

[stilleto]

first of all, do NOT say "HE IS" lol
the subject of a sentence means you have to tell the reader WHAT or WHO to which you are referring.
in your case, you've left off the "I" and also the pronoun "am". but if you'd rather not start the sentence with "I am", then leave it fragmented- its acceptable in a resume, or you could make your attributes into bulletted items, solving the dillemna.