Can someone fix this sentence.

[The_Ghost]

This is coming up as a fragment on my spell checker. Fuck English, I am a Math, Computer and Science whiz.

Make it better and I will hit you with some K!!



Excellent multi-tasker, planner and organizer, effective in a team and independently.

 

[redguru]

If it is a bullet, don't worry about it being a fragment.

 

[BigMike12]

This is coming up as a fragment on my spell checker. Fuck English, I am a Math, Computer and Science whiz.

Make it better and I will hit you with some K!!



Excellent multi-tasker, planner and organizer, effective in a team and independently.

Independent, effective in a team, as well as an excellent multi-tasker, planner and organizer.

 

[ohashi]

If it is a bullet, don't worry about it being a fragment.

Fo shizzle. Otherwise, you need a subject in there.

 

[The_Ghost]

If it is a bullet, don't worry about it being a fragment.

no its not a bullet. Part of a summary!!

 

[tuc biscuit]

I am an excell...........................

 

[ohashi]

I am an excellent multi-tasker, planner and organizer, effective both independently and as part of a team.

 

[The_Ghost]

Independent, effective in a team, as well as an excellent multi-tasker, planner and organizer.

Bill Gates says this is a fragment as well.

 

[redguru]

I am an excellent multi-tasker, planner and organizer, effective both independently and as part of a team.

I am a proven multi-...

 

[The_Ghost]

I am an excellent multi-tasker, planner and organizer, effective both independently and as part of a team.

shouldn't use "I am's" in a resume.

 

[ohashi]

Then stick with your sentence fragment. No subject = fragment.

 

[ohashi]

I am a proven multi-...

Wh-at a-re yo-u try-ing t-o sa-y, yo-ung ma-n?

 

[bullett]

Should begin with "He is"

 

[Dial_tone]

This is coming up as a fragment on my spell checker. Fuck English, I am a Math, Computer and Science whiz.

Make it better and I will hit you with some K!!



Excellent multi-tasker, planner and organizer, effective in a team and independently.

Excellent multi-tasker, planner and organizer, effective within a team as well as independently.

 

[ohashi]

Some of you don't seem to understand what a sentence fragment is; nor, for that matter, what the subject of a sentence does.

 

[BigMike12]

Your fired!

 

[redguru]

Why not bullet your summary, then? I never use a summary in a resume, because a resume should be a summary in and of itself.

 

[ohashi]

Anyway, as far as resumes go, having fragment sentences is accepted because the entire resume is about you.

 

[The_Ghost]

Excellent multi-tasker, planner and organizer, effective within a team as well as independently.

Beauty buddy, thanks a million.

Bill Gates likes and so do I!!!

K to all that chimed in!!!

 

[stilleto]

first of all, do NOT say "HE IS" lol
the subject of a sentence means you have to tell the reader WHAT or WHO to which you are referring.
in your case, you've left off the "I" and also the pronoun "am". but if you'd rather not start the sentence with "I am", then leave it fragmented- its acceptable in a resume, or you could make your attributes into bulletted items, solving the dillemna.

 

[The_Ghost]

Why not bullet your summary, then? I never use a summary in a resume, because a resume should be a summary in and of itself.

There are bullets elsewhere, this was done by a proffessional Company that specializes in IT people resumes. I just made a change or two.

They did an excellent job, no bullshit in it yet it reads amazing.

 

[bullett]

first of all, do NOT say "HE IS" lol
the subject of a sentence means you have to tell the reader WHAT or WHO to which you are referring.
in your case, you've left off the "I" and also the pronoun "am". but if you'd rather not start the sentence with "I am", then leave it fragmented- its acceptable in a resume, or you could make your attributes into bulletted items, solving the dillemna.

According to context, yes/

 

[The_Ghost]

Anyway, as far as resumes go, having fragment sentences is accepted because the entire resume is about you.

Really? I know HR people who do a spell and grammer check, any mistakes with either and they go in the "to bad, so sad pile"

 

[stilleto]

According to context, yes/

this context being a resume.

never make a resume in the third person! thats insane!

 

[bullett]

this context being a resume.

never make a resume in the third person! thats insane!

LOl. it could be an appraisal...if I missed the post that stipulated it was a resume, my bad....

 

[ohashi]

Really? I know HR people who do a spell and grammer check, any mistakes with either and they go in the "to bad, so sad pile"

There are special allowances in terms of English for resume-writing, being that it has only one subject throughout, AND it's is never, ever written in an essay or continuous format. Then again, some HR personel are idiots, dumb-asses, or both.

 

[The_Ghost]

There are special allowances in terms of English for resume-writing, being that it has only one subject throughout, AND it's is never, ever written in an essay or continuous format. Then again, some HR personel are idiots, dumb-asses, or both.

You must know the HR people I am talking about!!!!