a poem, by the shadow

[redguru]

Pinto Bean
by The Shadow

Pinto Bean, so small and brown
Do you like when i twirl in my gown?
Dance like Evita, I can
Even though, i'm not mexican.
Teach me to speak
in that language of yours
Then we will go out and party
Like two little whores!

The fourth line needs work. Chavez was right, Shadow's Meter is off.

 

[heatherrae]

That's Pulitzer Prize material, right there!

 

[The Shadow]

not a lot rhymes with mexican.
well, "win" kind of does, but 'win' and 'mexican' don't really belong together in a sentence.

Mexican

Puerto Rican

African

American

German

 

[stilleto]

The fourth line needs work. Chavez was right, Shadow's Meter is off.

Redguru
by the Shadow

How I wish to be rapped in red
guru
Over my shoulders
Down my back
Between my buttcheeks.
So beautiful is Red
Guru.
I want to devour him.
Lick by Lick.

 

[stilleto]

Mexican

Puerto Rican

African

American

German

quite the creative one, aren't ya?
i'm impressed shadowson.

 

[Gymgurl]

Stilleto you cracka me up.....LOLOLOL

 

[stilleto]

Gymgurly Gurl
by The Shadow

I hear you're a sexy thing
with long blond hair
and a wedding ring

But you know what they say,
"i'd still want you."
(If I wasn't gay)

 

[Gymgurl]

BWhahahahahahha...OMG that was great you talented thing you LOL

 

[redguru]

Redguru
by the Shadow

How I wish to be rapped in red
guru
Over my shoulders
Down my back
Between my buttcheeks.
So beautiful is Red
Guru.
I want to devour him.
Lick by Lick.

However, it's pretty good work.

 

[stilleto]

However, it's pretty good work.

the shadow is good. real good.