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Alright guys, so I'm teaching a class now (like BodyPump) at a fitness center that just started offering group fitness classes. It was a PowerHouse gym at one time, and is now a part of an affiliation that caters a little more mainstream. Which of these flyers do you like better?
 
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jack sparrow said:
Dear God please help me to show restraint. :worried:

I really hope this thread takes off and is a huge success :)

Somebody kill me now.
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but you didn't tell me which one you like better?

And I will have a new thread posted in a second that people will really either enjoy or hate... I'm anticipating some interesting feedback.
 
GUARDIAN said:
looks professional. go with #2. u should of made a poll.
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you're right I should have, and I haven't done that before... oops
 
I like #1 better. #2 looks like you're trying to be overtly sexual, while #1 has that 'come hither' look.
 
EnderJE said:
I like #1 better. #2 looks like you're trying to be overtly sexual, while #1 has that 'come hither' look.
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I kind of thought the same... since this class is generally more appealing to women, they might not appreciate the boobs highlighted in the shot
 
RachelEFC said:
I kind of thought the same... since this class is generally more appealing to women, they might not appreciate the boobs highlighted in the shot
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On the other hand, men will go the class in droves. :D
 
you should fire your graphic designer.
the type is all different sizes and not lined up.

also, i assume there's more information going on them other than your picture and the name of the class? like where, when, for what?

are these being printed on the gym's printer? because if so, count on the black background being streaky and grey.
 
stilleto said:
you should fire your graphic designer.
the type is all different sizes and not lined up.

also, i assume there's more information going on them other than your picture and the name of the class? like where, when, for what?

are these being printed on the gym's printer? because if so, count on the black background being streaky and grey.
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My graphic designer is a bit of an artist... he insists on the fonts and sizes being like that.

Also, Endurance Fitness is relatively prevalent in the area, that is why I didn't elaborate on the location.
 
I like top one. I work at a powerhouse franchise in fl (largest franchise chain in US) and #1 looks like the posters we use
 
i like the 1st one better except the edge of the poster makes the back of your arm look like it has cellulite (when in reality it doesnt)
 
stilleto said:
you should fire your graphic designer.
the type is all different sizes and not lined up.

also, i assume there's more information going on them other than your picture and the name of the class? like where, when, for what?

are these being printed on the gym's printer? because if so, count on the black background being streaky and grey.
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i was going to say that along with contact info.
 
curvymommy said:
Ok, Rachel, who is your intended audience?
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Ok, replying to myself here :)

Um, I assume ladies are your target for this class. Right?

So, if I had to pick, I would go with #1.
 
curvymommy said:
Ok, replying to myself here :)

Um, I assume ladies are your primary clientelle for this class. Right?

So, if I had to pick, I would go with #1.
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Thank you Curvymommy, I was thinking the same thing.
 
RachelEFC said:
My graphic designer is a bit of an artist... he insists on the fonts and sizes being like that.

Also, Endurance Fitness is relatively prevalent in the area, that is why I didn't elaborate on the location.
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he's a bad one then.

the TIMES of your class are different sizes. that's not being artistic, that's just poor design. the spacing is all off too- looks more like you did it than a professional graphic designer. I can see it clear as day and it looks bad.

<-- graphic designer here. 15 years of experience.
 
stilleto said:
he's a bad one then.

the TIMES of your class are different sizes. that's not being artistic, that's just poor design. the spacing is all off too- looks more like you did it than a professional graphic designer. I can see it clear as day and it looks bad.

<-- graphic designer here. 15 years of experience.
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he's a photographer, not a graphic designer... and I definately appreciate your feedback, thank you
 
1. The one on the top.

2. Listen to Stilleto.

3. NEVER assume that people know WHERE THE PLACE IS or WHEN IT'S OPEN.
 
digger said:
1. The one on the top.

2. Listen to Stilleto.

3. NEVER assume that people know WHERE THE PLACE IS or WHEN IT'S OPEN.
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do you think adding the website address would be sufficient?
 
RachelEFC said:
do you think adding the website address would be sufficient?
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only if the class is on the net.

add the actual address and what the class is. don't assume people will know by the name- they see you holding what will look like a lot of weight to them and get scared. you need a paragraph explaining what the class is and what it will do for them.
 
RachelEFC said:
Alright guys, so I'm teaching a class now (like BodyPump) at a fitness center that just started offering group fitness classes. It was a PowerHouse gym at one time, and is now a part of an affiliation that caters a little more mainstream. Which of these flyers do you like better?

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i've had some experience with this...i think you'll get a better response with the flyers and crowd you bring in with a more inviting picture. meaning, use one of your pics that has you smiling and looking like you're happy about what you're promoting.

from looking at the gyms site...doesn't look like it's meatheads you're really going to draw into an aerobic strength training class. more like moms, dads, younger women, grandma (like stilleto and smurfy) and grandpas. i could be wrong....but i'm usually not.

i'd consider having a graphic designer work on it for you...if you cant find someone to do it free...max they charge for something like that is 50 bones per design.
 
habitualhealth said:
i've had some experience with this...i think you'll get a better response with the flyers and crowd you bring in with a more inviting picture. meaning, use one of your pics that has you smiling and looking like you're happy about what you're promoting.

from looking at the gyms site...doesn't look like it's meatheads you're really going to draw into an aerobic strength training class. more like moms, dads, younger women, grandma (like stilleto and smurfy) and grandpas. i could be wrong....but i'm usually not.

i'd consider having a graphic designer work on it for you...if you cant find someone to do it free...max they charge for something like that is 50 bones per design.
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Oh, being relatable to moms like me who would actually be interested in a class like that? BINGO. Great marketing techinque. Smiles rock too. :)
 
curvymommy said:
Oh, being relatable to moms like me who would actually be interested in a class like that? BINGO. Great marketing techinque. Smiles rock too. :)
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yessssss...when you're promoting something like that...before you put anything on paper you need to figure out your target market. (obviously)

regardless if you're sexy, muscular, happy, ugly, whatever....you can relate to someone. (well i can't relate to ugly people but i can sympathize with them)



i'm funny.
 
#1 would be better.
 
Smurfy said:
i know!

i had to get a calculator just to do the math!
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Dont need one I can do it in my head. its like what 10 years?
 
stilleto said:
only if the class is on the net.

add the actual address and what the class is. don't assume people will know by the name- they see you holding what will look like a lot of weight to them and get scared. you need a paragraph explaining what the class is and what it will do for them.
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I would have to agree. I have been a nurse for 6 years. (not sure what this has to do with anything but I still agree)
 
habitualhealth said:
i've had some experience with this...i think you'll get a better response with the flyers and crowd you bring in with a more inviting picture. meaning, use one of your pics that has you smiling and looking like you're happy about what you're promoting.

from looking at the gyms site...doesn't look like it's meatheads you're really going to draw into an aerobic strength training class. more like moms, dads, younger women, grandma (like stilleto and smurfy) and grandpas. i could be wrong....but i'm usually not.

i'd consider having a graphic designer work on it for you...if you cant find someone to do it free...max they charge for something like that is 50 bones per design.
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Or she can play doctor with them like she does her photographer and gt it free.
 
jack sparrow said:
Yes, now add me to your "EF PEEPS I LIKE CLUB MEMBERS" you hooker. :heart:
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How deos he get in in 21 posts and I have over 5 thousand and I am not in. :rolleyes:
 
habitualhealth said:
i've had some experience with this...i think you'll get a better response with the flyers and crowd you bring in with a more inviting picture. meaning, use one of your pics that has you smiling and looking like you're happy about what you're promoting.

i'd consider having a graphic designer work on it for you...if you cant find someone to do it free...max they charge for something like that is 50 bones per design.
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I wholeheartedly concur.
 
habitualhealth said:
stop staring at my boobs for 2 seconds and bring your attention to my sig where it says PATMYWEINER!



....i just decided to change it tho.
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hey your boobs keep staring at my eyes DAMNIT!!!! Not my fault. and thanks
 
If I had to pick one over the other I'd say #2. BUT, I'd say neither!!!

Why do you have a sexy / alluring face on?? I'f you want to fill a class why not show a pic that says I'm fit cause I do this & I'm happy about it? You know smile, not the come here look.
 
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