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Omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!

Cal_21

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Great poem.

Pablo Neruda

Ode to my joy


Joy, green leaf
Resting on the window sill,
Tiny
Brightness
Newly born,
Musical elephant,
Dazzling
Coin,
Occasional
Fragile gust of wind
But more often
Everlasting bread,
Hope realized,
And duty properly done:
I scorned you joy--
I was given bad advice,
The moon hired me along its paths,
Ancient poets
Lent me their glasses
And I drew
A dark halo
Around everything I saw,
A black crown on every flower,
A melancholy kiss
On each pair of beloved lips

But there’s still time.
Let me make it up to you
I thought
The bush caught up in the storm
had only to singe
my heart,
that rain had only to drench
my clothes
in the crimson land of mourning,
that I closed
my eyes to the rose
and caressed the open wound,
suffering my share of everyone’s pain
that only then was I aiding my fellow man,
In this I erred.
I had lost my way,
so today I call on you, joy.

You are
As necessary
as earth.

You warm
our hearths
like fire

You are perfect,
like bread.

You are musical,
like the water of a river.

You make the gifts of honey
circulating like a bee.

Joy,
I was a moody youth:
I found your mop of hair
Shocking.

But when its abundance
showered down on my chest
I discovered it wasn’t true.
Today, joy,
I ran into you on the street,
far from any book.
Come with me.

I want to go with you
House to house, I want to go from town to town,
flag to flag.
You aren’t just for me.
We will go to the islands,
And seas.
We will go to mines,
And forests.
Not only will I be greeted
by solitary woodsmen,
poor washerwomen, or gruff and stately
stonecutters,
all of them bearing your bouquets,
there will also be crowds
and gatherings,
lumberjacks and longshoremen,
and brave boys
fighting their fight

Around the world with you
And with my song!

With the star’s
Winking flight
And the sea spray’s
Delight!

I will deliver them all
Because to all
I owe my joy.

Let no one question why I should want
To give the worlds’ wonders to mankind,

I learned the hard way
It’s my earthly duty
To spread joy—
And I do this through my song
 
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Knock It Off said:
Didn't read it, but I'm sure it's nice.

I didn't read it either, but I'm sure it sucks.
 
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Almost smacks of Maya Angelo.

Good stuff.

Cheers,
Scotsman
 
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mountain muscle said:
I think that is a manifesto, not a poem.

Interesting. That thought crossed my mind too for a moment.

What makes you think it's a manifesto?

The reason I thought it sounded like it could be were these lines here:

"I will deliver them all
Because to all
I owe my joy."

And

"I learned the hard way
It’s my earthly duty
To spread joy--
And I do this through my song"

It sort of sounded like a declaration of his intentions/reasoning behind it.

But it wasn't enough to convince me it was a manifesto, opposed to a poem.

I must admit poetry is not one of my main interests, so I'm pretty ignorant still.
 
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Cal_21 said:
Interesting. That thought crossed my mind too for a moment.

What makes you think it's a manifesto?

The reason I thought it sounded like it could be were these lines here:

"I will deliver them all
Because to all
I owe my joy."

And

"I learned the hard way
It’s my earthly duty
To spread joy--
And I do this through my song"

It sort of sounded like a declaration of his intentions/reasoning behind it.

But it wasn't enough to convince me it was a manifesto, opposed to a poem.

I must admit poetry is not one of my main interests, so I'm pretty ignorant still.


Damn bro making me think tonight?

Boldfaced bingo there. That is the defininition of a manifesto.

I still am thinking about the ex's ass and lips from earlier, forgive me.
 
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mountain muscle said:
Damn bro making me think tonight?

Boldfaced bingo there. That is the defininition of a manifesto.

I still am thinking about the ex's ass and lips from earlier, forgive me.

I know that's the definition. I only sensed a hint of it, but like I said, I don't know much about poetry lol.

Is this the ex that called from out of the blue? That was your thread right?

It's amazing the hold exes can have on us.

That's my ex in my boobietar
I got so wrapped up in the tatties that I never really questioned whether it was healthy for me to put it up like that... :worried: lol
 
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Cal_21 said:
I know that's the definition. I only sensed a hint of it, but like I said, I don't know much about poetry lol.

Is this the ex that called from out of the blue? That was your thread right?

It's amazing the hold exes can have on us.

That's my ex in my boobietar
I got so wrapped up in the tatties that I never really questioned whether it was healthy for me to put it up like that... :worried: lol


Yeah bro, that was my thread. Things are getting more complicated now. Just have to see what happens.

Poetry can have a pretty wide definition, I guess a manifesto could actually be a poem as well or vice versa. Nice piece of writing either way though.

You want confusion? read some Cummings.
 
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mountain muscle said:
Yeah bro, that was my thread. Things are getting more complicated now. Just have to see what happens.

Poetry can have a pretty wide definition, I guess a manifesto could actually be a poem as well or vice versa. Nice piece of writing either way though.

You want confusion? read some Cummings.

Good luck with the situation. Hope it goes well.

Cummings huh? Tomorrow's my last final before Christmas break (4-1-4 semester system). So I'll have extra time on my hands, and I'm looking for something to read. Thanks for the recommendation.

*gets back to studying*
 
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Cal_21 said:
Good luck with the situation. Hope it goes well.

Cummings huh? Tomorrow's my last final before Christmas break (4-1-4 semester system). So I'll have extra time on my hands, and I'm looking for something to read. Thanks for the recommendation.

*gets back to studying*


Nice. Good luck on your final.

It's not poetry but if you want a taste of brilliance, check out Vonnegut. MY personal fav.
 
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Made me think of this classic:

little bird with yellow bill
resting on my window sill
lure you in with crumbs of bread ....
















then I smash your fucking head :evil:
anon
 
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musclemom said:
Made me think of this classic:

little bird with yellow bill
resting on my window sill
lure you in with crumbs of bread ....
















then I smash your fucking head :evil:
anon


:worried: I'm skeered a you.
 
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man cal
 
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musclemom said:
Made me think of this classic:

little bird with yellow bill
resting on my window sill
lure you in with crumbs of bread ....
















then I smash your fucking head :evil:
anon

I hope you realize teh implications/cheeronsequences
of that...I now have a mad-e-crush on you...just sayin... :qt:
 
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The Old Vet said:
Poetry is for the fools that failed math.

I'm definitely a fool, however this dude won a Nobel prize for literature...lol

p.s. I'm a student of history homieeeeeeee :p
 
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Shit that means I should like it....I sucked at math
 
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Cal_21 said:
I hope you realize teh implications/cheeronsequences
of that...I now have a mad-e-crush on you...just sayin... :qt:
Oh if you liked that one you'll positively swoon when I pull up the ditties I have for matches and iodine :FRlol:
 
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