Hey is this coherent so far

[Nathan]

It's the first bit of my essay. Just want to make sure i still make sense. Whoa. It'll all come together later so don't concern yourself with that.



Something has been intelligently designed when it is the product of some thoughtful process that had the creation of said something in mind. In other words, it is a mind that conceives an intelligent design. The "intelligence" part of "intelligent design" represents a certain consciousness that operates with a purpose, that postulates some basic idea and then formulates a plan in bringing this idea to fruition. It doesn't necessarily have to be smart, and it may be working with some purpose in mind that is beyond our sphere of comprehension.
Over the past several years, proponents of the "intelligent design theory", or ID, have spoken out against the generally accepted scientific theory of biological evolution. The movement presents "intelligent design theory" to the public as a theoretical innovation that is supported by scientific evidence, that offers a more fulfilling version of the origin of the immense diversity of life than the popularly accepted theory of evolution.

 

[Lao Tzu]

i don't buy it, there doesn't seem to be anything backing up that statement. That is like saying if i can grow corn than i am a vegetable.

 

[DcupSheepNipples]

I hope that is your first draft! It does not flow well! Paragraphs! Thesis?

Re-Write! Do Over!

 

[Nathan]

I'll take "Anal Bum Cover" for $300, Trebek!

LOL. That was awesome. What was even better was Connery saying,

"I'll take The Rapists for $500."

 

[plornive]

Intelligent design is a formidable argument in some ways. Be sure to differentiate between intelligent design of life and intelligent design of the universe and the matter of the universe.

Define exactly what the premise of the argument is, as well as the boundaries of it supposed consequences.

 

[Nathan]

I just wanted to konw if the sentences themselves make any sense. As for arguing this i haven't started that yet. This was just a snippet from the whole thing. i don't go in order.

 

[Nathan]

I'm better than you all you know. Yeah, I know that you know. And I also know that you know that I know that you know. Eat shit and die.

 

[DcupSheepNipples]

I'm better than you all you know. Yeah, I know that you know. And I also know that you know that I know that you know. Eat shit and die.

How about putting that into proper syntax, form, and grammar so I can at least understand what the fuck you're saying before I dismiss it?

 

[Lao Tzu]

No, they sounded kind of pretentious & unnecessarily confusing. You should give a metaphor so people have an easier time understanding what you are saying.

 

[PHATchik]

I can understand the jist of the essay. However, there are definitely moments where it's borderline on incoherent. Maybe work on the flow of it a bit. It could help tremendously.

 

[Nathan]

Okay. Cool. Thanks guys.

 

[PHATchik]

Okay. Cool. Thanks guys.

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Anytime. And good luck.

 

[KnoXville]

Exemplary material, you will probably able to ameliorate it further at a later date when your mind is not as thc saturated, so is this little drafted shindig for formal submission or just public altercation ? Also I do singularly agree and fancy the overall synapses of your paper. So give yourself a enthusiastic pat on the back.

 

[Nathan]

Exemplary material, you will probably able to ameliorate it further at a later date when your mind is not as thc saturated, so is this little drafted shindig for formal submission or just public altercation ? Also I do singularly agree and fancy the overall synapses of your paper. So give yourself a enthusiastic pat on the back.

It's to hand in. I have to write a 6-9 page paper by Thursday morning. Gonna have to budghet my time methinks and not get high...or get REALLY high and not budget my time at all. I haven't decided yet on my course of action. And thank you.