Needs Work!
definately not your best work, but it was humurous. I definately like the longer stories better, they help to break up the stresses of everyday life.
What really amuses me is the pricks that read your stories and then have the balls to say that they don't like them, and stop writing them. Fucking dildos can see who the author is.
keep it up, just put a little more effort into the future stories.
later
mrhamilton