A Poem I Just Read. Felt powerful/sad enough to post it.

[2Thick]

I WASNT REFERRING TO YOU. YOURE MORE LIKE A THORN IN MY ASS THAN AN ENEMY.

Why is it that every time that you talk about me, you have to mention your ass?

 

[Robert Jan]

I`m sorry man, but that poem sucks. looks like its done by a total amateur. not that im a good poet, but compared so some shit they feed us in literature class its crap

 

[gettinlarger]

I`m sorry man, but that poem sucks. looks like its done by a total amateur. not that im a good poet, but compared so some shit they feed us in literature class its crap

I agree. Not much talent needed to write that, but I think the meaning is very strong.

 

[SV2]

Why is it that every time that you talk about me, you have to mention your ass?

Every time I talk about you I think of an ass too... I think it has something to do with your personality?

 

[the nature boy]

Every time I talk about you I think of an ass too... I think it has something to do with your personality?

how about hurrying up and paying me the rest of my frigging money.

 

[KAYNE]

Every time I talk about you I think of an ass too... I think it has something to do with your personality?

THATS WHAT I WAS GOING TO SAY.....EXACTLY WHAT I WAS GOING TO SAY.

 

[ZKaudio]

solid poem, i have similar feelings but no marriage/family connotations... hopefully I'm never uninspired enough to write something like that.