Valley of Death

[Frisky]

Yeah, so I walk into this valley of death
I don't fear
so its a pain path down thru here
I don't scare
I sharpen blades of life inside
to slash my way thru the walls of dark weeds
blocking the light out of this world
many years away
its far - far from where I stand
I walk
I move
I have loads of spirit pushing out
driving my fate deep up the throat of this valley of death
eating the light out of this world

minute by minute
I die some here
moment to moment
I kill more fear
step by step
I see light clear

Yeah, so I bleed thru this valley of death
I can heal
so its a wild hard time up out of here
I can climb
I grab the stuff of life inside
to spread my path with signs of me
echoing the light out of this world
just breaths away
so close - close to where I am
I feel
I reach
I have tons of visions pouring in
pulling me from flowering down in this valley of death
living in the light out of this world

minute by minute
I died back there
moment to moment
I killed the fear
step by step
I reached light here

 

[Cutiebaby]

what the hell got into you?

 

[Sub-Zero]

iv seen more worthless threads, but not on EF

 

[Frisky]

what the hell got into you?

poetry, I love it... and the fact that I feel like wrapping my little hands around a few throats and having someone beg for mercy.

Other than that, sex is great, food is good, kids are wonderful.

but poetry is my thing

 

[Cutiebaby]

gosh sweets. nice. Poetry can be relaxing for some people.

 

[Smurfy]

As I walk through the valley of the shadow of death
I take a look at my life and realise there's not much left
Cause I've been brassing and laughing so long that
Even my mamma thinks that my mind is gone
But I ain’t never crossed a man that didn't deserve it

Me be treated like a punk, you know that's unheard of

You better watch how you talking, and where you walking
Or you and your homies might be lined in chalk
I really hate to trip but I gotta lope
As they croak I see myself in the pistol smoke ... fool
I'm the kinda G that little homies want to be like
On my knees in the night, saying prayers in the street light


They been spending most their lives living in the gangsta's paradise
We keep spending most our lives living in the gangsta's paradise



Look at the situation, they got me facing
I can't live a normal life, I was raised by the strip
So I gotta be down with the hood team
Too much television watching got me chasing dreams

I'm a educated fool with money on my mind
Got my 10 in my hand and a gleam in my eye
I'm a loped out gangsta set trippin banger
And my homies is down so don’t arouse my anger ... fool
Death ain’t nothing but a heartbeat away
I'm living life do or die, what can I say
I'm 23 now but will I live to see 24
The way things is going I don't know



Tell me why are we so blind to see
That the ones we hurt are you and me.



They been spending most their lives living in the gangsta's paradise
We keep spending most our lives living in the gangsta's paradise

Power and the money, money and the power
Minute after minute, hour after hour
Everybody's running, but half of them ain’t looking
What's going on in the kitchen, but I don't know what's cooking
They say I've got to learn but nobody's here to teach me
If they can't understand it, how can they reach me

I guess they can't
I guess they won't
I guess they front
That's why I know my life is out of luck ... fool



They been spending most their lives living in the gangsta's paradise
We keep spending most our lives living in the gangsta's paradise


Tell me why are we so blind to see
That the ones we hurt are you and me.
Tell me why are we so blind to see
That the ones we hurt are you and me.

 

[artrius]

poetry, I love it... and the fact that I feel like wrapping my little hands around a few throats and having someone beg for mercy.

Other than that, sex is great, food is good, kids are wonderful.

but poetry is my thing

you have kids? That sucks.

On a side note... are you trippin? On acid? In heat? Pissed at the world? Want to kill everyone? Sup with the funky avatars?

 

[Phenom78]

"The Charge of the Light Brigade"
by: Alfred, Lord Tennyson

Half a league, half a league,
Half a league onward,
All in the valley of Death
Rode the six hundred.
"Forward, the Light Brigade!
"Charge for the guns!" he said:
Into the valley of Death
Rode the six hundred.

2.

"Forward, the Light Brigade!"
Was there a man dismay'd?
Not tho' the soldier knew
Someone had blunder'd:
Their's not to make reply,
Their's not to reason why,
Their's but to do and die:
Into the valley of Death
Rode the six hundred.

3.

Cannon to right of them,
Cannon to left of them,
Cannon in front of them
Volley'd and thunder'd;
Storm'd at with shot and shell,
Boldly they rode and well,
Into the jaws of Death,
Into the mouth of Hell
Rode the six hundred.

4.

Flash'd all their sabres bare,
Flash'd as they turn'd in air,
Sabring the gunners there,
Charging an army, while
All the world wonder'd:
Plunged in the battery-smoke
Right thro' the line they broke;
Cossack and Russian
Reel'd from the sabre stroke
Shatter'd and sunder'd.
Then they rode back, but not
Not the six hundred.

5.

Cannon to right of them,
Cannon to left of them,
Cannon behind them
Volley'd and thunder'd;
Storm'd at with shot and shell,
While horse and hero fell,
They that had fought so well
Came thro' the jaws of Death
Back from the mouth of Hell,
All that was left of them,
Left of six hundred.

6.

When can their glory fade?
O the wild charge they made!
All the world wondered.
Honor the charge they made,
Honor the Light Brigade,
Noble six hundred.

 

[Frisky]

you have kids? That sucks.

On a side note... are you trippin? On acid? In heat? Pissed at the world? Want to kill everyone? Sup with the funky avatars?

why in the world would having kids suck? they are the only thing I live and breath for daily. Without them I would be nothing. They are my life.

I come here and I vent and I portray a different person possibly from what I am in my everyday life. I don't and won't vent my frustrations out on my loved ones or my family... so sue me for finding a place that I can let loose so that I don't have to burdon those that I love with the frustrations of life. I take it somewhere else, and i don't result to drugs to deal with life issues, yet i tend to fall back on my peers and someone to just listen to what I have to say sometimes. I don't request advice that would just poof... make things better... but i do try to keep my personal issues out of my home and away from my kids.

The avatars are just something I found mildly attractive, I don't want to put my own up and actually am working on just removing all of my pics from the site compteltely. Its no this or that, its just because I liked the ava. If you can possiby look back you will see that i've posted such ava's in the past. I like them, find them very interesting. Nothing to do with anything else besides that.

 

[Cutiebaby]

why in the world would having kids suck? they are the only thing I live and breath for daily. Without them I would be nothing. They are my life.

I come here and I vent and I portray a different person possibly from what I am in my everyday life. I don't and won't vent my frustrations out on my loved ones or my family... so sue me for finding a place that I can let loose so that I don't have to burdon those that I love with the frustrations of life. I take it somewhere else, and i don't result to drugs to deal with life issues, yet i tend to fall back on my peers and someone to just listen to what I have to say sometimes. I don't request advice that would just poof... make things better... but i do try to keep my personal issues out of my home and away from my kids.

The avatars are just something I found mildly attractive, I don't want to put my own up and actually am working on just removing all of my pics from the site compteltely. Its no this or that, its just because I liked the ava. If you can possiby look back you will see that i've posted such ava's in the past. I like them, find them very interesting. Nothing to do with anything else besides that.

So there

 

[Frisky]

gosh sweets. nice. Poetry can be relaxing for some people.

I've been writing poetry since I was about 10 yrs old. I had a ton of notebooks with my mom before they were destroyed in hurricane Andrew. Ive written a wide variety, from happy to sad to down right destructive. Depened on my midset at the time.

I would wake in the middle of the night and sit up and start writing, I did it for about 6 years solid, and had tons of poems that I had planned on publising but they were all lost with the hurricane. I still to this day sit there and you would be amazed at the poetry that just goes thru my head.

The bad thing is when it hits you then it hits you, take the time right then and there and write it down or else your screwed. I get this daily and I just am at the wrong place and the wrong time to put it all on paper sometimes.

I think I have a few of my poems still that didnt get lost, Ill put them up here one day.

 

[artrius]

why in the world would having kids suck? they are the only thing I live and breath for daily. Without them I would be nothing. They are my life.

I come here and I vent and I portray a different person possibly from what I am in my everyday life. I don't and won't vent my frustrations out on my loved ones or my family... so sue me for finding a place that I can let loose so that I don't have to burdon those that I love with the frustrations of life. I take it somewhere else, and i don't result to drugs to deal with life issues, yet i tend to fall back on my peers and someone to just listen to what I have to say sometimes. I don't request advice that would just poof... make things better... but i do try to keep my personal issues out of my home and away from my kids.

The avatars are just something I found mildly attractive, I don't want to put my own up and actually am working on just removing all of my pics from the site compteltely. Its no this or that, its just because I liked the ava. If you can possiby look back you will see that i've posted such ava's in the past. I like them, find them very interesting. Nothing to do with anything else besides that.

uhm.... ok. carry on, then.

 

[EnderJE]

"There once was a guy from Nantucket...."

 

[H_T_]

is this about your vagina?

 

[Frisky]

uhm.... ok. carry on, then.

you know i love ya suga

 

[Raptorex]

in the valley of the giant, ho ho ho, green giant!

 

[Frisky]

you know what sucks

that i bust my ass daily and glam up all that is around me, make them look good, cover their slack when they are gone. I not only do this freaking 3d work but also IT work and anything else that is needed. I was not hired for all of this but i still do this shit and put put with all that comes with it.

 

[Raptorex]

you know what sucks

that i bust my ass daily and glam up all that is around me, make them look good, cover their slack when they are gone. I not only do this freaking 3d work but also IT work and anything else that is needed. I was not hired for all of this but i still do this shit and put put with all that comes with it.

that is a great poem! you have a future in it.

 

[artrius]

you know i love ya suga

not with those fangs you won't

 

[Frisky]

that is a great poem! you have a future in it.

im sorry .. but was that to be a prick or was it actually to be nice. Lately these days I don't know.

 

[Raptorex]

im sorry .. but was that to be a prick or was it actually to be nice. Lately these days I don't know.

seriously? am I ever a prick to you?

 

[bran987]

you know what sucks

that i bust my ass daily and glam up all that is around me, make them look good, cover their slack when they are gone. I not only do this freaking 3d work but also IT work and anything else that is needed. I was not hired for all of this but i still do this shit and put put with all that comes with it.

job can't that bad or you'd leave, unless you're psycho wooooooooooo

 

[Frisky]

seriously? am I ever a prick to you?

you never have been sug.. thats why i even questioned it.



I bust my ass daily, I raise two kids on my own, hold down two jobs and i maintain a household, cook, clean, all of that sizzle and still i get flack

I would love to see half of these bitches do what I do*

 

[H_T_]

you never have been sug.. thats why i even questioned it.



I bust my ass daily, I raise two kids on my own, hold down two jobs and i maintain a household, cook, clean, all of that sizzle and still i get flack

I would love to see half of these bitches do what I do*

i could do it and get flirted with more...

 

[alien amp pharm]

 

[Raptorex]

you never have been sug.. thats why i even questioned it.

I bust my ass daily, I raise two kids on my own, hold down two jobs and i maintain a household, cook, clean, all of that sizzle and still i get flack

I would love to see half of these bitches do what I do*

God Bless You Sugar Everyone within their right adult mind fully understands the tremendous value of a hard working woman, esp. single parenting, I know this thru experience trust me, someday it will pay off.