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anyone wanna critique my last album?
http://www.mp3.com/tsom
can download the songs for free off of there
Rich
http://www.mp3.com/tsom
can download the songs for free off of there
Rich
since everyone's talking about music
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Kryp2o
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Dude please don't take this as a flame, but as constructive critique from a fellow musician:
The instrumental portion of your songs are brilliant. You have have all different types of jazz, world beat, new age overtones going on there which makes for some melodic listening when meshed in with trance. Nice.
Now the bad part: As far as your lyrics and looks or overall image is way to Gothic. That stuff is just way to played out and isn't original anymore. Besides, it's too damn depressing. The shaved head and goatee is cool, but combined with the outfit looks like Anton Levee (sp?) meets Edward Scissorshand. Just not working.
Judging from the quality of sound and layering of music it seems like you put a lot of effort into this and for that I commend you. Excellent recording quality also.
Are you into your craft to become big at this, for the shear love of your art, or both?
Either case, and this is my take on it from my experience in the field. If I were the one recording this, I would re-think my approach overall because from what I can see you have the talent musically. But you should try to harness it to convey to a more accessible audience.
Just my .02
The instrumental portion of your songs are brilliant. You have have all different types of jazz, world beat, new age overtones going on there which makes for some melodic listening when meshed in with trance. Nice.
Now the bad part: As far as your lyrics and looks or overall image is way to Gothic. That stuff is just way to played out and isn't original anymore. Besides, it's too damn depressing. The shaved head and goatee is cool, but combined with the outfit looks like Anton Levee (sp?) meets Edward Scissorshand. Just not working.
Judging from the quality of sound and layering of music it seems like you put a lot of effort into this and for that I commend you. Excellent recording quality also.
Are you into your craft to become big at this, for the shear love of your art, or both?
Either case, and this is my take on it from my experience in the field. If I were the one recording this, I would re-think my approach overall because from what I can see you have the talent musically. But you should try to harness it to convey to a more accessible audience.
Just my .02
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