Thanks for all the comments and suggestions guys. The posing is definitely the next step. I didnt realize how big of a difference it makes, but I have pics where I did it right, and the areas that look bad in these, like back width and hams, actually look up to par.
Nathan, you, I am doing the one in town here.
Stats in the pic, which you'll probably find surprising.
weight 216lbs
height 5'8.5"
bf 9%
arms 18 1/2 cold, my frame makes them look much bigger
Projected contest weight, likely somewhere between 195-200lbs