Need Help With Friends Resume

[VicTusDeuS]

A friend of mine has been through a lot of rough times since highschool. He had many jobs but they were mostly dead end no where to move up places where he either maxed his top earning potential or the place just went out of business. In one of them that he did have the potential to move up, he was at a ceiling because of his lack of a college education.

10 years after highschool he decided to go to school for computers...too bad the market for his type dropped so now he has a computer degree, but no job..

I can try to get him in where I work, but it requires a customer service background, not a computer one. He has customer service skills because of other positions but i need some advice in making an objective..

"Motivated self starting professional with varying degrees of customer service experiance mirrored by a technical education in client help"...and then i am stuck..


If anyone has any ideas on what to change around to make it sound better or help me write an ending for it it would be appreciated...thanks.

 

[notoriousQQ]

Professional and hard working graduate with excellent communication and problem solving skills seeking a client focused employment opportunity in a dynamic business environment.

 

[VicTusDeuS]

thanks, ill work with that too

 

[MassiveGunz]

I can help hear bro.
One thing for sure if hes stakked then make sure he includs a pic. Epspesialy if its a girl thats hiring.
Cuz that way even if he dosnt get the job at least he can get layed LOL get it.

Alos make sure their arent cusss and swears in the resume. I had one line that said "not the britest but works like a sonof abitch" cuz thts what my old manger uset to say all the time. I got rid of the sonofabich part and used "bastard" insted.
I dont know how well tha waoks tho cuz i Havnt got any calls back but for sure having swears wasnt helping.

OH!
and make sure that where he works lets him drink beer.

 

[slickdadd]

I'd start with spelling experience right.

 

[VicTusDeuS]

I'd start with spelling experience right.

 

[mylife]

http://search.officeupdate.microsoft.com/TemplateGallery/ct115.asp

 

[slickdadd]

Sorry I'm an ass.

 

[VicTusDeuS]

cool

 

[VicTusDeuS]

true, i came up with something much shorter and to the point. It sounded professional but still stressed his concentration in customer service skills...aka personality..I turned it into my boss, so we'll see how it goes.