I don't think some one gets motivated by seeing the video bro ..
It looks just like a normal video .
The BGM dosent seems good. (Infact it's not the one u should use).
No need of showing the equipment in the video.
No repetitions of the same workout poses ..
It's easy to criticise I knew that.
Bt I said what I felt ..
one thing i'll never do is to knock someone for trying... if you are making advertisements for a gym etc. you might want to get with someone who specializes on it or has an idea of the best frames and types of things to focus on... like i said, its great to try and you just learn as you try it more and more...
Back ground music ..
And bro I didn't criticised u .
Its my opinion . Which I said without any hesitation.
I kno u vil make good videos .
As the quality and taking of this video was good.
I know you weren’t. I was serious about the thanks for the feedback it’s the only way I’ll get better. What do you think of this edit instead? https://youtu.be/Rgbx9PgDCWw
there are people you can hire to help with marketing and editing the videos etc.
my advice is don't use women, cars, money, etc to pimp a gym. that is instagram bullshit and i cannot stand that crap.. takes all your credibility away