What do you think of this poem I "found"

[Scotsman]

"Sea of Hope"

Lost, set adrift
On a sea of my own longing
Helplessly desiring
To find a beacon of hope
Captured sadness like a pall
Looming ever present in the dark
Abashed before a sea of woes
Clinging helplessly to lost ideals
The onset of nights blackness
Like a tidal wave comes
Capsizing reason
And drawing forth doubt
From the depths below
Dawn's breaking light coming forth
Saving love's last grasping hand
Holding out above all else
Enraptured mind losing focus and bearing
Seaking truth from the ever changing sea
Shallows reached upon broken shells
Ending the long journey
Regaining balance and direction
Washed ashore amidst the joy of discovery
Encountering that which has been forgotten
Beaming hope rises like the sun
Enamoured rays of truth
Pierce the stone cold shield of lonliness
Unexpected discoveries awash with delight
Longing never dissipated
Instills the sense of urgency
To admit the happiness of a time shared.

Cheers,
Scotsman

 

[Beachboy6294]

It's ok just not one of my favorites

 

[JayC9]

despondent & despairing

 

[Razorguns]

Great I feel depressed .. and gay.

r

 

[mustang_00]

did you write that after you ate it on your bike and ruined your fancy dress shirt???

 

[stilleto]

i like it.

 

[EnderJE]

Christ, cheer the fuck up.

 

[BlueBird]

I like it too, Scots. And I find it moves from despair to hope.

 

[bw1]

poems are geigh

 

[*ebony*]

poems are geigh

P.S. i also like it. conveys this sense of hope to come, a new begining.