Here's a short poem I wrote 2 days ago...

[lartinos]

Life is good and life is great,
But sometimes for the best things in life
you have to wait,
Could be when you turn that or corner,
or open that door,
Seize that moment so that you don't dream of more.




Noone's read this so I'm not sure if it's good, but I've never written one people didn't like... unles they're just being nice . This one was short so I figured I'd post this one as I've seen that many of you fuckers forget to take your ritalin. Writing poetry is probably the least manly thing I do .

 

[Lestat]

pretty cool, inspirational and brief. Two qualities all poems should have.

 

[lartinos]

Thanks, shows the positive attitude I take right now.

 

[shogun7]

Writing poetry is probably the least manly thing I do .

Right...

Word up to the poem.

 

[drsketch]

no offense but that poem sucks ballz

 

[SaladFork]

no offense but that poem sucks ballz

LMAO~

 

[lartinos]

no offense but that poem sucks ballz

it's very simple on purpose, I have more complex ones. U of course can't do better than this simple one.

 

[drsketch]

I dont write poems bud, I drink, fight, fuck, lift, work.. If I want to be nice for a broad I take her out somewhere then finish off with hot sex.

But yeah I seen good short poems and your sucked... But hey dont be mad appreciate my honesty.

 

[jnevin]

I dont write poems bud, I drink, fight, fuck, lift, work.. If I want to be nice for a broad I take her out somewhere then finish off with hot sex.

But yeah I seen good short poems and your sucked... But hey dont be mad appreciate my honesty.

^^This was some poetic shit. I bet there are a slew of wommenz pulling splinters out of their asses from pining for you.

 

[Humble Pride]

^^This was some poetic shit. I bet there are a slew of wommenz pulling splinters out of their asses from pining for you.

No shit, huh...............