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can someone rephrase this for me

Agathe

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medb was a weak persona even though some might see her as Sovereignty godess with some strong characteristics

im writing a paper
 
Agathe said:
medb was a weak persona even though some might see her as Sovereignty godess with some strong characteristics

im writing a paper

Medb was a spinless but at times she flashed strong characteristics
 
how about

Medb is at times described as a strong persona with the characteristics of a sovereignty godess, however these are undermined by her seemingly weak nature.

its a thesis statment

the question is

how ought we to understand the character and narrative purpose of medb in the tain
 
Agathe said:
medb was a weak persona even though some might see her as Sovereignty godess with some strong characteristics

im writing a paper

medb was either an obnoxious twat or a vulnerable girl depending on whether or not you thought you had a chance to bang her.
 
How about...

"Although many would think Medb a strong persona and a godess of sovereighty, in reality her weak nature often threatened to undermine her."

say it don't hint at it... you know what I mean?
 
Becoming said:
How about...

"Although many would think Medb a strong persona and a godess of sovereighty, in reality her weak nature often threatened to undermine her."

say it don't hint at it... you know what I mean?




"Although many would think of Medb a godess of sovereighty whilst having a strong persona , in reality her weak nature often threatened to undermine it."

Shit I don't know anything, just waiting for my 'soup' to cook.
 
Agathe said:
medb was a weak persona even though some might see her as Sovereignty godess with some strong characteristics

im writing a paper

Pretty lousy adjectives, not to mention pretty obfuscated in it's meaning overall..but i'll just work with what i got:

"Medb possessed a weak personna, even though some might see her as being a sovereign goddess with certain strong characteristics".

Sentences should be free-flowing and be able to convey the message clearly. If your reader is going back and re-reading many sentences just to _understand_ what the hell it said -- you're not doing the reader any justice.
 
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