A poem for becoming

[Scotsman]

The Forge

Blazing firs of desire and rage
Fueled by pointed determination and fear of failure
Will: the great hammer striking in rhythm
Against the hardened steel anvil of my spine
Forging out the tempered iron in my heart
Each strike of the hammer adding rigid form
Beating out the shape of body to desired plan
Each glowing mass cooling to purposeful shape
Fire hardened limbs of steel outstretched
Covered in layered iron sheets
Gaining strength and resilience
Each rep like the hammer’s swinging fall
Pounding out the bodies weakness
Strength gained and goals attained
New fires burn the hotter yet
Further tempering metal to its use
Muscle like iron flexes hard
Straining to break free and become something more
Strike after strike shows the cruelness of the will
Power and strength still will arise from hammer beaten steel
Desire burning, flame erasing pain
Charring away the roots of discomfort
Giving emergence to the strengthened soul
Arising like the finished sword from the forge
Ready to go to war and conquer fear and doubt.

There is that a little manlier.

Cheers,
Scotsman

 

[from zero]

Bro, if you're gonna make a poem about Becoming, you'll need a more realistic theme:

Becoming is gay
Hey, what do you say?
It is almost May
A time to be gay
For Becoming to stay
Gay in the bay

 

[jerkbox]

Bro, if you're gonna make a poem about Becoming, you'll need a more realistic theme:

Becoming is gay
Hey, what do you say?
It is almost May
A time to be gay
For Becoming to stay
Gay in the bay

LMFAO

 

[BO-DEN]

Bro, if you're gonna make a poem about Becoming, you'll need a more realistic theme:

Becoming is gay
Hey, what do you say?
It is almost May
A time to be gay
For Becoming to stay
Gay in the bay

thats art!!

 

[Becoming]

Scots - that is pretty good man, I can't say anything funny about it at all, it is kind of like listening to some good industrial tunes - you write that one too?
*****
FZ - I would think your poem is funny, but since jerkbox told me about your tequila drunken 69-a-thon you had on each other, I can't really take you seriously...

sorry.

 

[BO-DEN]

oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwch

 

[jerkbox]

FZ - I would think your poem is funny, but since jerkbox told me about your tequila drunken 69-a-thon you had on each other, I can't really take you seriously...

well, quit asking for pics you big fruity-ass....we didn't take any

 

[Becoming]

well, quit asking for pics you big fruity-ass....we didn't take any

sorry, I guess outing you two mankabobs to the board will have to wait then...

 

[Scotsman]

Scots - that is pretty good man, I can't say anything funny about it at all, it is kind of like listening to some good industrial tunes - you write that one too?
*****
FZ - I would think your poem is funny, but since jerkbox told me about your tequila drunken 69-a-thon you had on each other, I can't really take you seriously...

sorry.

Yeah that is another one of mine. I wrote it about seven or eight months ago when I was out in the wilds of Wyoming.

That's a fucked up response to FZ, but still very funny.

Cheers,
Scotsman

 

[Becoming]

That's a fucked up response to FZ, but still very funny.

Fucked up is my middle name....