I'm back to writing mode

[the_alcatraz]

So a few of you already know I used to be an amateur writer who published a bunch of stuff back home. I'm starting to write again now just to fill up some extra time I have on my hand. Would like to post up some of my work to share with EF.

Here's something I wrote up a few days back:

ADHD

By: Bilal K.

A labyrinthine lagoon of opulent pastiche
Vile and vague in demeanor
Yet vibrant with a vivacious void
A plethora of evocative ebullience
Surpassed only by redolent stench of what may be
Susurrous serendipity of symmetrical proportions
Skeptical and cynical intent to beleaguer
Existence examined through a spy glass
Pandora’s Box has arrived

 

[75th]

So a few of you already know I used to be an amateur writer who published a bunch of stuff back home. I'm starting to write again now just to fill up some extra time I have on my hand. Would like to post up some of my work to share with EF.

Here's something I wrote up a few days back:

ADHD

By: Bilal K.

A labyrinthine lagoon of opulent pastiche
Vile and vague in demeanor
Yet vibrant with a vivacious void
A plethora of evocative ebullience
Surpassed only by redolent stench of what may be
Susurrous serendipity of symmetrical proportions
Skeptical and cynical intent to beleaguer
Existence examined through a spy glass
Pandora’s Box has arrived

 

[PICK3]

deep, bro

 

[bakemeacookie]

It was a dark and stormy night.

c

 

[OMEGA]

I like it!

I can tell your a deep feeler of things ALC

it would be of great service to others for you to actively share these things

They Help more then the artist sometimes knows.......

I remember ONE SENTENCE from a person was enough to positively impact me.......

 

[the_alcatraz]

The dictionary is your friend.

 

[jnevin]

It was a dark and stormy night.

c

lol

 

[75th]

The dictionary is your friend.

You had the thesaurus opened next to you while you wrote this, didnt you?

Tell me, whats a good synonym for STFU!

 

[the_alcatraz]

You had the thesaurus opened next to you while you wrote this, didnt you?

Tell me, whats a good synonym for STFU!

You should see my other writings....

 

[the_alcatraz]

90 people viewed this thread but only a handful commented.....one no one reads poetry anymore?? good or bad, I wanna hear it