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freak daddy

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From:collosus
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posted November 03, 2000 11:04 AM

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rejuvinated from a calm resting
the unknown awaiting your presence
as a hollowness blackens your spirit and the smell of madness fills the fields
you begin your march to your rampage with blind wrath and emptiness pouring from your eyes
seeing your destination just steps away
deciding to take one last deep breath
only exhaling all hope away
as you enter your hatred and take the podium
a petrified crowd,frozen can only pray for life
as bullets flow like words a sea of maroon blood begins to rise
the pungent smell of death filtering in the air equalling the screams and broken dreams of all the convicted
as the morbid gunshots subside and the executioner now apprehended
we all question why?
society, victims are'nt we all!!!

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freak daddy

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From:collosus
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posted November 03, 2000 12:38 PM

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i guess nobody likes my poetry. i dont expect any responses its just how i felt this morning after watching the news.i feel better now though. i just looked in the mirror and realized just how beautiful i really was. damn, it's good to be me!

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havoc

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From:The 27th Century, USAtiva
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posted November 03, 2000 12:41 PM

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Freak Daddy that was great, do you have a speech to give or something?

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"Shine So Vibrantly That You Must Squint to Catch a Glimpse"

"I'm reaching a height which you said cannot be, I'm bringing the light which you said you can't see"


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Badkins21

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From:College Station, TX, USA
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posted November 03, 2000 12:42 PM

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It's good to be me, too, bro...interesting stuff!

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freak daddy

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From:collosus
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posted November 03, 2000 12:49 PM

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no speeches havoc! i just get tired of all the bad shit going on in society. i still believe we all should ban together and take these criminal matters into our own hands. it's not like our judicial system is going to change any time soon.

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freak daddy

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From:collosus
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posted November 03, 2000 05:52 PM

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can't let my poetry go to waste....bump!

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JohnnyO

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posted November 03, 2000 05:54 PM

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i like that.. much deeper than my hickory dickory dock poem i composed for shagwell.


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freak daddy

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From:collosus
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posted November 03, 2000 05:57 PM

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i never heard that one big o, but i'm sure i can figure it out!! lol..

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JohnnyO

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posted November 03, 2000 06:17 PM

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let's relive the greatness.. <ahem>

hickory dickory dock
shagwell sucks my cock
her lips go down and sucks all around
hickory dickory dock


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The Ranger

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posted November 03, 2000 09:23 PM

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Freak,

I liked it, I like the in depth look at our souls...in those lines we all find that which we hate....Khule,

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